Above in thread: Carfree ecovillages: combining people and nature
Soif,
I would recommend adding an abstract/ summary at the top of the article, as well as a table of contents / highlight of the important points.
Because the article is so long, this would be a very helpful addition-- readers can focus in more easily on the parts of the article that interest them.
my proposal at:
http://twiki.yoism.org/twiki/bin/view/Main/YoMonastic
has a TOC but it is lacking an abstract/ summary of important points.